Friday, May 14, 2010

A re-worked plein air study.


I have finished re-working this Plein air study from St. Marguerites Island in the Bay of Cannes, Cote D'Azur.
The couple of areas in this photo with a shine have already been started on. (I decided to photograph the work in progress after starting)
Starting from the base oil sketch, the composition is very busy, and the small branch to the left of the right hand tree is mimicking the center trunk giving a regimented and fragmented look to the work.
I have adjusted the curve on the right hand tree already, the dark blue of the original sketch is visible to the left of the reworked trunk. I have put a base coat on the small branch, which I am about to paint out next. I have also painted areas of the 3 tree trunks
and darkened the dark area behind the lefthand tree.

In photo two, I have done further work on the tree branches. There are areas of light added to some of them. I have also emphasised the curve and twist of the middle tree trunk.
I have painted some foliage in the foreground, top left, this adds depth to the painting.
I have greened up the main area of foliage to the back.
Second coats have been given to the two areas of ground under the trees. The little piece of wall has been painted out also, it does nothing for the composition and is not needed. The dark line of the old wall foundation on the other hand adds interest and does the secondary job of creating contrast to the strong line of the tree's roots on the surface of the ground. These roots make the trees more interesting.
The section of the Island in the background has been repainted. This has been cooled down and adjusted in tone to complement the newly painted sea and sky areas.


In the third photo I have reduced the area of foliage to the right hand side of the painting. This area was to square and also quartered the painting. I had a little fun with this part though...creating a little map of Ireland out of it....
I have left the basic square, but I have broken it up to make it less solid.
It has also allowed more of the horizon to be visible.
Although not noticable in the photograph there is a small variety in the colouring of the sea. This gives a pleasant vibration to flat blues of the background, and not just in the closeness of the colours in the sky to the sea itself. This has the effect of giving heat and life in what could have been a very flat and un-interesting area.
I have also created another curve and twist in the righthand tree trunk to give a better shape to the fork. Finally the foliage on ground and behind the trees has been re-worked and detail added.
I feel the painting is finished now. Though there is always a possibility I may see some change to make in a month or two.
This last photo is of the view, though not the same angle, which was a little to the left I think. But it explains some of the changes made, and the original sketch.

2 comments:

PwincessCleo said...

wow nice painting

Amatheya said...

What a lovely painting. I love the mottled foliage :)